Thursday, January 3, 2013

The Most Known Unknown: My Own Self!!



Did you ever felt the antiquity... 
the obliqueness ...
I went through..... 
in my own self...!!  

Did you ever see the anxiety... 
the frustration.... 
I caressed.... 
inside my own self!!

Did you ever notice the suffocation.... 
the confession.... 
I confined 
to my own self!!

Did you ever witness the humiliation... 
the hindrances... 
I kept silent
in my own self!!

I kept asking you.....
but you were silent..
kept peeping into me...
inspiring to go through any extent!!

For me..
You were 
the most known, unknown
when I saw you first ..

I flipped myself 
from the sky so high
that broke into many 
from a single drop!

Delving deep 
through the ocean of your eyes
I went down
into the sea of your heart!

And now 
I feel so entrenched in you
that you have become
my own self!!

- Varsha Singh

6 comments:

  1. A great self revelation through fabulous poetic lines... the poetess is giving vent to our voices of frustration and ecstasy...
    And now
    I feel so entrenched in you
    that you have become
    my own self!!
    The conclusion is excellent heart touching.. from the unknown darkness to the effervescent knowledge of things....Congrats for such a grand poem Varsha...

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    1. Thank you very much Sir!! I feel glad to get a review from your side.. It's a matter of immense pleasure for me ! Thanks again!

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  2. Beautifully penned self introspection...it gives a feeling talking to oneself in front of mirror...So well described the conscious thoughts and feelings through human self-reflection... Keep it up, Varsha!!!!

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    1. Thanks a ton Sir!! Your words are precious to me... Will definitely try making my verses more alive!
      Regards

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  3. beautiful....just an observation...in ur 1st verse, line 1....
    Did you ever felt the antiquity...
    the obliqueness ...
    I went through.....
    in my own self...!!

    should not it be Did you ever feel, instead of felt, the antiquity....:)

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  4. Lovely Work, would have liked it more if u could have pulled the rhymes a little more!!

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